That was quite a wild story! Did you generate it with GPT, or is it all your own work? I’m having trouble grasping the central theme, especially given that twist at the end. It really felt like something along the lines of Robin Sharma’s The 5am Club—at least until it took that sudden turn!
100% human brain generated. Its just a satire of internet copy-writing with a sci-fi twist, not much to it. Just got inspired that weekend and pumped it out in 48 hours. I should have spent more time editing but it is what it is.
That was a fun read.
Nice read. Well written.
first half was amazing but once you revealed the time machine the dialogue felt very stilted. 7/10 would recommend
Thanks for the feedback, always trying to get better.
Good stuff! Very captivating.
I was waiting for the "sign up for my 7 day online marketing course" part but it didn't come :-D
This was a great read
That was quite a wild story! Did you generate it with GPT, or is it all your own work? I’m having trouble grasping the central theme, especially given that twist at the end. It really felt like something along the lines of Robin Sharma’s The 5am Club—at least until it took that sudden turn!
100% human brain generated. Its just a satire of internet copy-writing with a sci-fi twist, not much to it. Just got inspired that weekend and pumped it out in 48 hours. I should have spent more time editing but it is what it is.
Please send this to "Escape the Cubicle"
Perhaps he would like to come for a boat ride with me
lol- literally dying